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this is my first fanfic so I just wanted to let you all guys know hope you all like it
also I want to apologize for any errors on the story

Usumakui naruto is a teenager that was in love with a girl named Haruno sakura

he every day asked her out and she always rejected him, but today something

was going to change. naruto woke up very early in the morning but he didn’t got

out of bed but was awake, he was thinking of sakura he was tanking how he

should asker today for a date and than he had a flash back of how many times he

has asked her for a date he didn’t asker for much just a simple date but like

always she say no and he begged but no matter how much he begged he still got

se same answer NO NARUTO! I HAVE SOMETHING THAT I HAVE TO DO! end

flashback so he was now sitting there in his bed then se told him self that today

something was going to change that was a promise to himself so he got up went

to the bathroom took a shower then he went to his closet and put on a white t-

shirt and black pants not his normal orange ones then he went back to the

bathroom and brush his teeth then he looked him self in the mirror and decided

that today he wasn’t going to put his headband on but he was going to have it in

his pocket just in case he said then he went out to look for sakura and ask her for

a date so he was walking his normal routine of everyday “he did asker every day”

so he was passing where ino’s flower shop is and he decided that he was going

to get her a rosé he went in and had a little chat with ino

Hey ino oh hi naruto what are doing here? Well this is a flower shop what else in

suppose to do here hehe! he said wile giving her a big smile. Well then get the

dam flower and get out of my shop! In was pist  of what naruto said and he

noticed that so he apologized and ino calmed down a little so he got the rose pay

for it and went to the hospital where sakura is it was the time se got out because

today there wasn’t much work and she was going to have the day free to do

whatever she wanted se was in the entrance of the hospital when she saw

naruto lie every day she did and she thought again dam he doesn’t give up does

he she told her self, well today I’m going to put a top to this I’m going to tell him

to not ask me on a date again. Hi sakura-chan said naruto giving her one of dose

famous gins of his, oh hi naruto how you been doing she said with a weak smile I

been ok sakura-chan

He said so naruto is there something you need or are you visiting someone sakura

said and then inner sakura butt in he is her to ask us on a date like everyday

innerssaku said

Yeah I know he just doesn’t know when to give up does he sakura said

Yeah he a complete baka inner said well have to put a stop to this today sakura

said

Then she was brought back from her thoughts with naruto waving his hand in

front of sakura asking her is she was ok, oh sorry naruto I spaceout  there for a

minute,

So naruto why did you came you didn’t answer when I ask! She said well you see

I was thinking since you have the day free we could go on a date naruto said

Mmm! Sorry naruto but I have something to do back at home and I also have to

study something so that I can improve my healing jutsu sakura said while thinking

this got to send him off then she thought that she has to stop this daily routine of

him asking her for a date and she always saying no then when she was about to

tell him about the he should shop asking her for a date every day.


Hey naru… she was cut off be naruto when he told her that it was okay and then

he say good by and left but before he left he gave her the rose he bought in ino’s

shop and told her I bought this for you! well bye sakura-chan I guess I’ll see you

around and then he left. Leaving a shocked and confused sakura shocked

because he didn’t even begged and confused because he didn’t show any pain on the rejection ,that he always showed.

TBC
©2008-2009 ~franky652
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Author's Comments

this is my first fanfic narusaku of course XD


hope you all like it


CH 2 [link]

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This is a good story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Quotes, spellcheck and spacing would be nice. Other than that you're doing a good job.

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thanks i'll keep that in mind

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Thx =)

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