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this is my first fanfic so I just wanted to let you all guys know hope you all like it
also I want to apologize for any errors on the story

Naruto was walking down the street thinking that he might had acted a little bit

cold towards sakura then he fund him self in front of his favorite restaurant

ichiraju’s ramen and he entered and asked the owner for a glass of water and a

bowl of  rammen after that she went training and by the time he finished he went

home and in his way home he was thinking on what he was going to do now  that

he wasn’t going to go and ask sakura for a date what was he going to do with

that free time he is going to have!

Nah I just train eat rammen train and sleep and may be the day after tomorrow

we’ll have a mission!

The next day sakura  woke up still confuse on how naruto acted yesterday and

she thought I’ll ask him today he ask me every day for a date so I’ll ask him latter

about it then she god in her work clothes and then she took off to the hospital

when her shift was done “she was done for the day” she was expecting to see

naruto waiting for her or see him coming to ask her for the date he always want

but she didn’t saw him she looked around to see if he was near or coming but no

naruto could be seen near she thought that may be he got up late  and she

waited for hour but that time she said that if he shows up he was going to get a

beating up so hard that he was going to wish that he was going to hate the day

he was born.

She then had waited long enough so she went looking for him at ichirakus training

ground and for last his apartment but he wasn’t home either dam naruto where

are you hiding she said almost screaming that she got a few stares from the

villagers.

He couldn’t be in a mission since she is in the same team but she decided to go

and ask tsunade about it but one ting led to another and she got distracted in the

shops,

By the time she was done buying stuff she needed she remember that she was

going to ask tsunade if she knew where naruto was but first she went home to

leave the stuff she bought she entered her house and threw the tings in her bed

and then went down stair to go and ask tsunade about naruto she was closing

the door when shikamaru show up behind her telling her that tsunade needed her

in her office immediately,

When they entered the office the first thing sakura notice was that  all her friend

were in the room .

What’s going on? she asked ok now that everyone its here I have to tell you

something very important and in going to need a team of six for a rescue  mission

but before that I have to tell you the mission tsunade said looking very worried

sakura noticed and was about to ask but tsunade stared to talk. The mission is to

rescue a fellow ninja that you all know very well he was sent to a escort mission

this morning then she was interrupted by sakura asking who was it then tsunade

said im getting there then se started again.

Like I said he was sent in a escort mission this morning but half and hour. ago we

found out the he was attacked in his way back we think that may have been

Akutski, by this time you all may have figured out of who im talking about, naruto

shikamaru said

Sakura was about to talk but was cut off by tsunade, we don’t know if he was

captured or not but he has been missing for 2 hours im calling this mission as a

rescue because we don’t know if he has been captured or not I hope he had

managed to kill them if he did he my had been injured badly we’re talking about

akutski so I need volunteers for the mission!

Im going sakura said now with tears in her face,

Im  in too said shikamaru

Me too said ino the hinata, kiba, chouji sai, shino, tenten neji every one

volunteered

Tsunade was happy that naruto had such a good friends he is  like a son to her!

Then tsunade begun again ok im happy you all cared about naruto but I only need

six of you and am adding one more so in going to be a team of seven

Who are you adding asked ino.

Hi there!  kakashi-sansei said sakura between sobs

Ok said tsunade sakura you are going to be in the team in case naruto needs

medical attention even do I don’t have to tell you I know you are going  sakura

just nod okay tsunade begun again neji you too for your biakugan kibe you for the

tracking of naruto sent sai u as wall u may be needed you too chouji and shino

Okay the team is assembled and you have half an hour to leave meet kakashi  in

the main gate.
©2008-2009 ~franky652
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i think i could have done it better but oh erll here it is

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Nicely done. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

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i love ur story the plot is great but take alittle more time in reading it over so that it can be even better i got alittle lost in the story im a writer as well i know ur just starting off but u should look over ur work more but overall it was very very good keep up the good work and keep on writing

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thanks =)

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no problem

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Thx =)

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